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Anywhere the Wind Will Take Us

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Weakness in loving years is our star tonight!

Welcome to the stage, our set of heart-filled "love story"

They'll probably wonder why I'm writing a review!

They don't even know I attended the performance

Not saying I'm a huge fan of the actors

None the less I'll enjoy my spot in the audience

We all knew you were a great performer maybe one day you'll win an Oscar.

I feel bad for anyone who missed out maybe next time you can catch it on broadway



***Lines Not In Song***



FIRE! FIRE! FOREST FIRE! FIRE!



The writing of this play was a huge mistake it was poorly written and the actors didn't even remember their lines

However a good point of the show was that the members of the cast acted out each scene with such passion

It's almost as if the part were they confessed their feelings wasn't an act at all
Okay so these are lyrics to one of my band's (Where Nothing Gathers) songs. The removed lines aren't in the song itself but when I wrote it as a poem they were. The demo of the song will be up soon after some tweeks to the music *cough* need a drummer *cough*
So this song is about someone I once cared about and something that they did that I know about, however they don't know I know. So yeah.
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I like this DJ, I like the fact that you're telling a story. I think it's awesome when a band tells a story with music. Can't wait to hear the demo. I'd like to help you with your band but I can't play an instrument, I can only sing. ^^;